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Q. Do You Ever Write on Paper?

Computer Folder for Book 3

A. If I’m on a plane during take-off, in Starbucks expecting a friend, or in my car waiting for one of my kids, I write on paper.  I keep a notebook in my purse for such occasions, though at times I’ve been reduced to using sticky notes.  Normally, however, I do all my writing on my computer, including brainstorming, lists, notes, first drafts, and revisions.  I have different documents for stages of a book that I keep in one folder, and I… Continue reading

Note to Self: It’s Not the Plot

I swear I’ve been here before.

I’m working with this draft of Book 3, and I’ve been revising along pretty steadily from the beginning, knocking out characters and scenes, deepening what remains, and I’ve reached a place where Gaia gets out of trouble.  She can catch her breath for a minute, which is obviously a disaster as far as writing goes.  The two of us sit back and look ahead at the next few scenes, and the links between them are simply not there.  In fact, all… Continue reading

Head People and Pie

Lately, a fellow writer friend* asked me enviously if I’m one of those writers who has characters in my head demanding attention.  He said his characters were more likely to tell him to go watch TV and leave them alone.  It was the envy that surprised me.  It implied that writing is easier when you’re possessed by voices, like you’re just a crazy person getting paid for yielding to your psychosis.

It’s not like that.  Here’s what it’s like for me.  I have a character… Continue reading

Raising the Stakes

Suppose your character is running late. If she’s late to class, or late to her sister’s wedding, or late to see her mother on her deathbed, the stakes are different.  Suppose she needs to exit a room.  It makes a difference if she can simply walk out, or the door is locked, or the room is on fire.  Next suppose she needs to get out of a burning, locked room in time to save her mother from dying.  We’ve just raised the stakes.

Locked in.

In… Continue reading

Pondering Next Ideas with Agent

Ever since I talked to my agent Kirby Kim last week about what to write after the Birthmarked trilogy, I’ve been feeling optimistic and encouraged, both about the ideas themselves and the open-ended direction of my writing.  I’m normally optimistic anyway, but I did wonder if Birthmarked was a fluke.  Now I believe my brainstorming is leading me in good directions, and I’m grateful once again that I have a great agent to work with.

Food for Thought

As far as I know, there’s no prescribed way… Continue reading

Behind the Scenes: A Note on the French Translation

My daughter and I met Hélène Bury, the French translator of Birthmarked, in front of the Hôtel de Ville in Rennes at 10:00 Saturday morning and instantly bonded.  Hélène is funny, smiley, and genuinely nice, and what’s more, she and I have certain things in common that sealed our friendship: we both prefer hot chocolate to coffee and adore Colin Firth.

C. O'Brien and H. Bury, in Rennes

I’m particularly grateful that Hélène was chosen to translate my novel.  In the first place, she has lived in… Continue reading