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<\/p>\nI\u2019m all for profanity in books when it suits the characters and the situation.\u00a0 Most of the teens I know employ a range of swear words and use them flexibly for humor, sarcasm, and rage in real life, so when I encounter teens in books who use obscenities, it doesn\u2019t faze me much.\u00a0 It seems real.<\/p>\n
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So why don\u2019t I use obscenities in the Birthmarked<\/em> trilogy, and isn\u2019t it inconsistent to be prudish about language when I\u2019m writing about edgy concepts, like childbirth, hanging pregnant women, torture, murder, and abortion?<\/p>\n It makes me wonder how often we mentally lump together foul language with adult concepts.\u00a0 We presume a book with swear words is likely to contain sexual or violent content or both.\u00a0 Since a film can be rated PG-13 due to its language, sexual content or violence, we\u2019re conditioned to assume the three go together and all are equally objectionable for impressionable minds.\u00a0 We assume someone is \u201cmature\u201d only after they can handle all three.<\/p>\n But guess what?\u00a0 I happen to like books that deal with edgy concepts and for my purposes, it works better artistically to write about them without profanity.\u00a0 My trilogy is in third person, and it is futuristic rather than contemporary, so I don\u2019t have the challenge of trying to create a believable interior voice of a teenager today.\u00a0 In the dialogue, my teen characters have a degree of formality that fits the oppressive society that governs them.\u00a0 As they get to know and trust each other, their language relaxes, too, and I liked playing with that.<\/p>\n From a practical standpoint, I happen to use swear words sparingly in my own life, so I didn\u2019t have to cut back much for the book, but there were definitely places when a character could have naturally said \u201cOh, my God!\u201d\u00a0 In those cases, I deliberately edited to avoid even that mild curse, because, in fact, the societies in my novels are so devoid of traditional religions that the characters never mention God.<\/p>\n Curiously, I think the lack of obscenity is allowing my work to fly under the radar of some parents who use the degree of profanity as a guideline for what is acceptable for their kids to read, especially for younger readers.\u00a0 Such parents may hope to protect their kids by preventing them from reading books with obscene language, as if profanity were the gateway to worse evils.\u00a0 I have personally watched a mother flip through a novel, searching for \u201cs—\u201d and \u201cf—\u201d to rule out the book as a gift for her young daughter, yet my books would pass her test, and the girl would inadvertently be exposed to some intense passages.\u00a0 Other readers have mentioned a distinct preference for no obscenity.\u00a0 In fact, this blog was inspired in part by one who recently wrote to me:\u00a0 \u201cAlso thank you so much for not ruining your story with profanity. I hate reading a book with a good plot but lots of language because I have to stop reading it.\u201d<\/p>\n I guess I\u2019m glad my book without profanity isn\u2019t being rejected by readers who don\u2019t like swear words, if you can follow my logic of negatives.\u00a0 A little subversive side of me wonders if I\u2019m sneaking evil to them in the guise of a clean read. Yet I\u2019m also wary, because I think the 12+ rating of my books is actually an invitation to advanced readers as young as 10, and I\u2019d be careful of which kids that young are mature enough for the concepts.\u00a0 Most of all, I\u2019m interested in this place where profanity and edgy concepts diverge.\u00a0 I\u2019m intrigued when we can use civil language to encounter and discuss horrific ideas.\u00a0 I love that this can happen in YA literature.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":" I\u2019m all for profanity in books when it suits the characters and the situation.\u00a0 Most of the teens I know employ a range of swear words and use them flexibly for humor, sarcasm, and rage in real life, so when I encounter teens in books who use obscenities, it doesn\u2019t faze me much.\u00a0 It seems […]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[4,3],"tags":[9,37],"class_list":["post-1730","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-birthmarked","category-writing","tag-birthmarked-2","tag-writing-2"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.caraghobrien.com\/book\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1730","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.caraghobrien.com\/book\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.caraghobrien.com\/book\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.caraghobrien.com\/book\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.caraghobrien.com\/book\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1730"}],"version-history":[{"count":17,"href":"https:\/\/www.caraghobrien.com\/book\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1730\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1749,"href":"https:\/\/www.caraghobrien.com\/book\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1730\/revisions\/1749"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.caraghobrien.com\/book\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1730"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.caraghobrien.com\/book\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1730"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.caraghobrien.com\/book\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1730"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}